BA: How does my Prologue sound?

ohmygod your a freaking awesome writer. It's fabulous. Now I want to read it. The prologue is easy to follow, and would catch attention easily. The prologue is supposed to give you an intro and you did good with that. :) I wish I could write like that. I'm trying to write a book. You sound like you copied it out of a famous author's novel. This is great! :D